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Jack Silly and his beanstalk (Jack and the beanstalk: my version)


 
 
 
 
 
 
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Jack Silly was a modern-day youngster who lived with her grandmother in a land far far away. His parents were world war 2 bomb casualties when tora tora japanese bombers ravaged their village clean. Fortunately Jack
, a baby then was snatched off to safety by her grandmother when the bombings begun. Unfortunately, his parents were charred victims. The house was completely burned down.
12 years later, their house was rebuilt. They were rich thus the bombings impact was slightly felt. They begun life again, having cattle,
livestock, herds of goat and sheep but then life’s sad irony was too inevitable, a lingering dearth have gradually descended like a slow sweeping decimation. Scarcity become the land’s agony. Slowly the land become desolate as drought have made the land a barren desert. The Silly
family has nowhere to go thus they were stuck to subsist on the meager crops destitution has to offer.
They have none except the still thriving and resilient goat, Jack’s playing buddy he called Vixen and who has served the family in many wonders they has not yet known til that time when the goat’s secret was revealed under the veil of compulsion–the dearth. It was a magical goat of wonder.
Grandma Silly knew, to leave for better pasture was the best option but leaving them stuck she have decided to end their agony. The goat was their last subsistence, inevitably, they have to eat it, then, they got nothing. It would be the point where their was no hope like stuck in a cavern of starkest probability. Only the darkness as their enveloping prison fettered to its loyalty, ultimately, death.
Grandma Silly was sharpening the axe when she ordered, ‘Jack tie Vixen to that dry stump!!!”
Jack responded, ‘Do we have to do this, lala? Vixen is my friend, now that she is too in this drought, why dont we just let her go for her chance to live?”
‘And we?’ piercingly and goggling-eyed, ‘We better die having King’s meal in our belly!!”
Obediently, he tied Vixen, redundantly tapping her head, leaned to her ears and whispered, ‘May God be merciful and spare you tonight.’
The goat instead responded with a thorough ear flapping emotion and with sodden rounded eyes stared at him in conscience-harrowing plea.
‘Dont look at me like that Vix, it makes me want to unleash you!’Jack depressingly drew back, head hung low. Farther, he thought he overheard the goat spoke, ‘Will you eat me, Jack?’
Jack Told his grandma but the old woman shrugged away.
The time of slaughter came. Compulsion was a gravity Jack decided conformingly, they have to survive. He has not the slightest cognition of her grandma’s suicidal dinner.
Tremor-bound as natural for first time butchers having a friend to kill, he proceeded as intended. Reaching the goat he noticed something unusual. The goat’s dung seem to have an unnatural shade as though something bright inside the black coat was giving Vixen’s dung a dark glowing appeal. Slowly with a heavy heart, he rested the axe near the tree stump then using a finger played on the goat, tracing on her rib cage and poking her, in gloomy tease. He heard the goat whispered, ‘Will you eat me?’
Jack’s apathy was bec of his grandma’s angry retort after he bugged her a times, ‘you’re just hallucinating! cannot you see what this damn drought brought to our senses!’
The woman noticed his lameness, ‘Jack if you want to have a better funeral, butcher it now!
From below, he reluctantly shouted, ‘OK!’
Slowly Jack took the axe and theatrically in slow motion appraised it, in its arc motion, but his attention was caught by its glistening splendor as though the axe steel was pure gold. He raised it and was about to drop it when the goat spoke and catapulted him butt first on the ground.
‘Will you kill a friend Jack?’
Sitting on the ground he was mesmerized, ‘VIXEN, YOU TALKED?’
The old woman was upstairs preparing the poison concoction.
The goat let loose a grunt then, ‘Stand up Silly! Vixen will show how you will live!’
Jack was still incredulous, ‘Is this for real?’
The goat commanded, ‘Untie me moron!’
Jack repeated, ‘Are you really talking?’, touching her ear flaps.
The cow kicked him hard.
‘OW? WHAT DID YOU DO THAT FOR?’
Vixen mocked, ‘want another one?’
Jack noticing his grandma’s annoyed approach, excitedly reasoned,’Grandma look,’ pointing to the goat, ‘Vixen talked.’, as the woman was close, he open his palm for some magical revelation, ‘look Vixen’s dung it has magic!’
Incredulous, the OLD woman now in hot temper, snappily growled, ‘VIXEN TALKED? DUNG FOR WHAT?’She tried to snatched it off and slap into his face when the goat stamped on her harshly, then spoke, ‘OLD WOMAN,’ then in captured attention, grandma was goggle-eyed, ‘if you answer my riddle, you’ll survive!’
The goat delivered the riddle, ‘Black it may be, but of the chasm’s depth veiled a throbbing liFESAVER…’
‘I KNOW!’ Jack enthusiastically bellowed and laughing, ‘bean magic!’
the old woman reaching the pinnacle of shock, fainted.
The goat though as by the signal of fate pounded her foot magically as inception to magical succession about to be Jack’s fortune but then that was how life for Jack Silly and grandma turned into fantasy and magical transition have been we now told of as bed time tale, the story of JACK AND THE BEANSTALK.
That night they planted the bean seeds extracted from the goat’s black dung. Magically, it have grown gigantically reaching to the golden kingdom up in the clouds where innumerable wealth would then enrich Jack so as was told in fairy tale books.
But for that night, they dined in giant bean seeds.
MORAL OF THE STORY: DESPISE NOT THE DESPICABLE IN THEIR FILTH, BEC WITHIN THEM MIGHT BE SOMETHING THAT IN THE FUTURE WOULD BE TO YOU A LIFESAVER…
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When God played on lil’ Susie



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little susie 
bubbly lovely and fragile, an all smile little girl of intangible fluorescence–a blossom too young yet too quick was how evanescence on innocence flourished like picturesque nightmare in rising tempo of red.
‘mama, i lost barbie in the woods, i go find her please?’
‘dear its already twilight, i look for it in the morning.’
twilight was not simply fair. it was a masquerade of the lurking transition, gradual and impoverishingly, evil.
little susie went anyway.

IT WAS THEN WHEN GOD PLAYED ON LITTLE SUSIE.

she broke her ankle sloping down to where the unknown venture rested smoldering. lil’ susie in red gorgeous dress sprawled, her barbie clad in tight possession as she lay broken on hell’s deep of myriad eccentrics. her wound was deep and blood spill profuse as an appeal for the drooling mystique beasts prowling in circles.
‘oh, mama might be worried deep, i have to go home.’
but immobility was how God put a trick on her as the chill of the night was her heartbeat’s pulse.
the howling wind bellowed laughter,
‘oh, lil’ miss is broken, soon she’ll be wolf’ chow!’
a chilling wolf cry seconded eerily. somewhere an ant beseeched threateningly,
‘hey, i knu’ yo arf in trouble but yore sitting on ma dome, move abit or yore dead meat, pal!’
‘oh, im sorry mister.’
lil susie was stalled for the night like a tempting delicacy on a crocodile’s appraising nose. anxiety high rising like mercury incendiary on peril’s lair.

HOW COULD SHE EVER GET HOME TO HER MAMA WITHOUT BEING PIECED APART?

OR, WOULD SHE EVER GETS HOME AT ALL?

a fluttering butterfly drone around, a charm of colors, appealing, soft and kind yet beneath is marred to taint.
‘oh, sweet miss is stuck. oh, mama help me!’
a chirping cricket in animosity piped in smoke,
‘get the hell outa here kid, you’re too appealing for trouble, stray away or be dead!’
trembling, she clutched on the grit instead on wicked jagged wicks.
‘oh, i’m cut.’
bleeding she snappily sucked on her fingers but realizing too late, the wick embedded cut her lips instead.
‘ow! it hurts. if only mama is here, she knows what to do.’
broken ankle? too paralyzing.
gushing wound? weakening. appealing for peril.
a pool of darkened hue was prominent shade on the ground.
nightfall was barely light. perception was on silhouette’s wave as indication of life or wind. neither was there yet sign of threat yet the strangeness of silence is eerie and spooky.
‘lil’ susie’s afraid.’
a wolf cry..long and durably, goosebumps, then intermittently, of many.
struggle was impossible as hypothermia impeded correct judgment and actions. everything around is an ambiance estrange and unfavorable.
for awhile though, reprieve gave her some sleep after sipping on gathered dew, the moon broke in radiance bathing her in glorious balm yet the hope it left, could it be as flickering candlelight withstand the battering tempest?
grit was not her attribute. tenderness was.
to be durable single-handedly is quite a survival disadvantage but somehow she managed to hang on resiliently yet with the intensifying hypothermia how could she sustain?
crack!
a broken twig.
alarm?
looking at the direction, only the sound of gushing wind was present, mocking.
then, a symphony of rhythmic cacophony. were they wolves?
they were heckling coyotes.
‘got lost lil’ princess? hek hek, want a ride home?’
sniffing her wounds, she bellowed a wolf-like howl, long and a wicked tease.
‘get off you bad, ugly…’, smashing a stick yet too thin, it broke.
past midnight.
at home she should have been sound asleep, clutching at her barbie, dreamily and happy. regularly, was mama’s lullabye before sleep, an enchantment she most often hear in state of euphorical dream but now she wished for it longingly, much so, in this state of secluded solitude.
she scribbled randomly on the ground,
‘oh, dear God make my feet to walk. bring mama here, dear lord, am afraid of them’
but no matter what recourse she attempted, futility was her eternal bind and inevitable, an adjective of her dilemma–indeed it was.
‘hek hek hek’ coyote named scar, after a decision, concluded, ‘eat her!’
so as the story goes…
was she indeed?
it is a memoir inherent of nostalgia somehow, aroused in recollection, how it ends, was something of the Almighty’s decision. it is different for everyone even in like situation.

ending*
walking the streets of hollywood, a man, clutched hands in pockets lazily strolling by, whistling, ‘oh say can you see by the dawn’s early light…’
he kicked on a litter hard that he skidded flip-flop butt stump on the ground. an acrobat of waste flew joltingly astray, tabloid clips scattering by a snap, intermittently ahead.
insignificant rubbish yet something out of it stands out, prominent.
sitting hands down, and dusting off debris, he clarified on the attraction. it is an old article yet somehow nostalgic, monumental. the news read, ‘GIRL RAVAGED BY WOLVES’
what provoked him for recollection was its similitude, an old tale, her grandma susie’s everlasting memory–memoirs of a struggle.
HOW DID THE STORY ENDS?
i just told you how.

**all children by heart, i call them lil’ susie.

DENN

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